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Your first most important message must be succinct and appealing
The right story about your business rings true and is succinct. Is your’s?
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Restricting yourself to 10 words, tell me about your business. Is it simple?

Have you described why someone should be interested in your product or service? Is it succinct?

Have you given me a what and a why? Does it resonate?

Is part of the heart and soul of who you are evident along with your value proposition?

Does what you say sound fresh, because you’ve used familiar (though not overused) terms in a novel way?

If you’ve pulled this off by yourself, you’re magic.

However most of us, myself included, struggle mightily to unearth our own business story.

By ourselves we can’t sort the wood from the trees, spot the gem in the dross, narrow down to the one central truth of what I call your Million Dollar Message.

An outsider is (essentially) the only way to bring objectivity to revealing the essence of your first, most important story.

Writing 10,000 words is easy. Refining your story down to 10 words is arduous.

But get it right, and you’ve faceted the diamond of your story crown.

The story behind any photo is paramount
Your first story must be succinct and attractive. Story is what moves us.
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We’re a self-interested species, and we’re driven by story.

As much as we might care about others, it’s our own now and future which more concerns us.

The lens with which we view any advertisement or offer is naturally biased towards what we see is in it for us.

What might be non-interest today could well be “I’d better find out more”, tomorrow.

But given the plethora of offers which cross our paths every day, achieving just the tiniest amount of curiosity is a good start.

Does your offer solve a problem?

Do you get to the point as quickly as possible?

Does it sound attractive?

You’re after story sweetness – a combination of beauty and brevity, a call to attention which leads down the path to a call to action.

It’s not easy to achieve…but that’s what you’re aiming for.

(And if you’re having trouble unearthing your own Million Dollar Message, give Punchline a call. We bring clarity)